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Old Oct 28, 2009, 8:00 PM   #1
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Do you find this too dark?


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Old Oct 28, 2009, 8:09 PM   #2
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I don't now it just needs a word in the left bottom corner...... looks very nice....refreshing to look at...
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Old Oct 28, 2009, 8:20 PM   #3
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Dark? Not at all. Nice pick.
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Old Oct 28, 2009, 8:31 PM   #4
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I like the lighting, it does look like somehting should be in that negative space in the lower left.
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Old Oct 28, 2009, 8:31 PM   #5
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Go with it, Eddie-

I love your work. But as has been suggested put something down in the left hand lower corner to balance things out.

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A thought of shorts would do like a discription of the pic in one word in greytone...what ever style... Poster style is what I see as " Behold" and then maybe a smaller thought?!....
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Old Oct 29, 2009, 10:53 AM   #7
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Thanks all for your replies!


How about this angle instead, I think it fills the void better, yes?
Has another element, the drop of water on the petal. Of course, I'll need to clean up the specks

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Yep - first shot was very good but 2nd is even better for the reasons you mentioned. Very good stuff.
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That drop in the 2nd... hmmm...
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That does fill it and the drop well looks like its crying cause its wants your input on how it looks lol.... Eddie lovely picture but I think you hurt the flowers feelings!
Looks like you are having fun....
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