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Old Dec 27, 2009, 10:55 AM   #1
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Old Dec 27, 2009, 11:27 AM   #2
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Nice subject, good colors, lovely sky. Would be better had you moved (zoomed) closer to eliminate the roadway -- and perhaps to your right to avoid the fence post.
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Old Dec 27, 2009, 12:18 PM   #3
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I like it very much, colors are wonderful. While I don't mind the fence post, I agree that it would be much better without the road. It would be interesting to see the picture cropped some to take out the road and the post cloned out, just for comparison.
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Here we go. Definitely an improvement getting rid of the road.Name:  retouch1.jpg
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I like the edit much better without the road. The sky is nicely exposed along with the rest of the shot. The only thing I would do is clone out the post as below.
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Old Dec 27, 2009, 6:12 PM   #6
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Mark1616, what editing software do you use? You had better results removing the post than I did using iPhoto on my Mac.
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That was with Corel Paint Shop Pro.
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