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Old Mar 5, 2010, 11:04 AM   #1
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It is going to be 2in x 6in.

yay nay ideas?

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Old Mar 5, 2010, 11:16 AM   #2
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it looks quite nice. but seems busy and bright for me.

i would like to know exactly your company name and what you do when i first look at it. the way its arranged now, i have to look at it a bit to see where the pieces fit.
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I had to look a bit before i recognized the camera. Perhpas instead of just making it red you might use a B&W of a real camera and Change your Zero to a different color. Instead of red how about a nice blue color. Then maybe you can associate Zero with cold hence the blue.
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Old Mar 5, 2010, 11:20 AM   #4
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oh, i didn't even see the camera!
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Old Mar 5, 2010, 11:20 AM   #5
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will do, ill see what i can do, ill have it up in like 5ish?
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Old Mar 5, 2010, 11:47 AM   #6
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really like how the red popped more?
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i think the red looks better but i would make the outline of the camera bolder so it pops out more.

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You may work with a grid to get the pieces ordered. Too much confussion here.
And offering Sports Photography AND Grafic Design at the same time... hmmm...
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All in all I dont like your design. But I think Ive added some punch to it. I dont think people will see the camera as just a black silhouette, and also I dont think they will read ZERO with the camera as the letter R. A nice pickle for you to solve. Or not.
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It looks too busy for my liking--it is difficult to decide what to pay attention to. I'd prefer a more simple approach.
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