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Old Jun 25, 2010, 5:43 PM   #1
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Default a few model shots

i haven't been on in awhile.
here are few shots



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Old Jun 25, 2010, 7:22 PM   #2
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Well I see a big difference here between your session and another session by another member. These girls are all making direct eye contact. It makes it all a whole lot different in feeling. Your lighting is pretty good and without a doubt my favorite is #2. That look is worth a million dollars.
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Old Jun 25, 2010, 7:30 PM   #3
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I don't like the shadow line under the model's left arm in photo #1. Also, watch that pesky background. She has a metal bar in a sensitive spot. In Photo #4, two points. Her shoes could have matched her dress. And, more of a question...is the backlight just a little too strong? No other issues.
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Old Jun 25, 2010, 7:57 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by Bynx View Post
That look is worth a million dollars.
Al Gore would never pay her that much....and he'd smack her up a bit too
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Old Jun 27, 2010, 10:25 AM   #5
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Hey John these are some very good, you and the girls should be happy with them.

OK now the critique.

1. The lighting is to harsh, there are hot spots on her chest and her face has shadows. Try to even out the lighting next time.

2. This is the best one of them all

3. It looks as if there is a shadow running through the middle her arm and chest which is emphasized by the very bright light on her face.

4. The lighting seems to be in an area to small (not on her face) and the wall with the shadows is too bright to the side of her. If you used a reflector try a bigger one or more then one that can cover more area for the full body shots.
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