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Old Jun 27, 2010, 1:10 AM   #1
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Hello all,

I decided to try a composite image of the moon at correct exposure and the lake at night. I'm not sure if i like the resulted image. There's a part of me that's drawn to it and another part that says "not a good one". I know i broke the rule of thirds, but i was just trying something new.
Please let me know what you think, and i'll try better next shoot
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Old Jun 27, 2010, 1:22 AM   #2
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Here's another version with the moon closer to the mountains and the empty sky cropped out
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i like it ! i've experimenting with similar shots. (i'm far from an expert)
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Old Jun 27, 2010, 6:30 AM   #4
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I like the first one better, the positioning of the moon looks more realistic. The empty sky doesn't bother me in the first one.
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Old Jun 27, 2010, 8:26 AM   #5
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The first photo does feel more natural (angle of reflection) to me. I like it, interesting detail in the moon!

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