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Old Oct 4, 2010, 9:41 PM   #1
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I took this scene to the center......

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Old Oct 4, 2010, 9:45 PM   #2
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you have great converging lines. but the colors are dull and the its pretty soft
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Old Oct 5, 2010, 7:08 AM   #3
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the bush in the foreground is a big distracting, and i agree with Hards80 as well.
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Old Oct 5, 2010, 7:58 AM   #4
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I would crop out the bushes in the front, that takes the picture a little out of the center. Just my opinion.
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Old Oct 5, 2010, 3:47 PM   #5
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same here you need to loose the distracting foreground or lighting up to include it in the image but other than that nice shot love the colours.
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Old Oct 5, 2010, 4:03 PM   #6
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It's wonderful, as it is. The bushes give the depth. The colors are gorgeous. I vote.
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Old Oct 5, 2010, 4:16 PM   #7
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Attempt at enhancing the perspective aspect. Used PE2 to auto adjust levels.
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Old Oct 5, 2010, 4:36 PM   #8
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Thanks for the input all!
I walked down to the beach, hoping for a sunset yesterday. The clouds just quickly rolled in and any sunset was nixed. I just happened to be looking down the beach through my viewfinder when I saw how I could center in on the converging lines, it really was quite accidental, and I only took this one frame. When I uploaded the pixs and viewed it, I found it intriguing, and that is what prompted me to ask you guys for input. The lighting was terrible, and I really paid no attention to the foreground.
Now, thanks to you guys, I will go get this shot again, in better light, and frame it better too. Check back, I'll post it in this thread!
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Old Oct 5, 2010, 5:52 PM   #9
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I like it. To me the bush adds to the overall feel... Overgrown and deserted!
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Old Oct 5, 2010, 7:50 PM   #10
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I like it
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