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Old Jan 9, 2011, 10:01 AM   #1
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Default Commuter Train in B&W

I have a color version of this also. The only editing I did (other than the B&W) was to rotate the image a hair to make it more level. Otherwise no cropping or highlighting.

The shot was taken with a Sony DSC-HX1 with 100mm focal length, f/5.2, ISO 125, and a 1/320th shutter speed.

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Old Jan 9, 2011, 12:07 PM   #2
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i think it's a tad bit out of focus. And for my taste, when something is in B&W, i like to see some more contrast. This photo seems very light and gray. Lastly, the open space on the top left of the photo makes it a little out of balance for some reason too.

I assume this train was not moving?
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Old Jan 9, 2011, 12:16 PM   #3
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after just a quick edit, here is what i came up with. (I didn't crop it though).

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after just a quick edit, here is what i came up with. (I didn't crop it though).

I do like the contrast. I should have done that.
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