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Old Mar 17, 2011, 7:29 AM   #1
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Default Happy St. Patty's - Doolin, Ireland (critique please)

Hi everyone,

I'm showing the before and after of this, as along with the photo skills, I'd like to know what I could do better in PP. Thanks for your help!

PP'ed in CS4 RAW:

DoolinCemetery2 by daveleau, on Flickr

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DoolinCemetery by daveleau, on Flickr

This is one of the first concerted efforts I have made in sharpening (while knowing a little of what I was doing rather than random sharpening) and I used the adjustment brush to lighten items to the left. In another version (not shown), I tried Tonemapping w/ Photomatix, but it came out too grainy.

Thanks for your help!
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Old Mar 17, 2011, 9:07 AM   #2
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Sharpening is OK, but the processed one looks too greenish.
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Sharpening is OK, but the processed one looks too greenish.
Not on my monitor -- but the yellow may be pushed a bit too far.
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