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Old Mar 31, 2011, 10:19 AM   #1
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Hi All,
Here is a photo from Kings Park with Perth
City at night. I thought I exposed it reasonably but
looking at it the neon signs are not clear so I am doing something
wrong but cant figure it out.
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Old Mar 31, 2011, 9:56 PM   #2
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Still a lovely City from a super location.
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Old Apr 1, 2011, 5:13 AM   #3
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Yes it is just not the most compelling
picture so I need to retake it so it is cleaner.

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looks good except I think it needs curves and contrast to bring out the dark background and lights
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Nice pick. If you see, there're some blown out whites. You could try bracketing. Under exposing will able you to recover detail. Over exposing will not.
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Old Apr 3, 2011, 8:47 AM   #6
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Thankyou all for comments.
Will take all the advice onboard and
try to do the shot again.
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