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Old Jun 9, 2011, 7:00 AM   #1
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Default City from the eyes of a Lake

My initial trails of taking Panoramas from Fujifilm HS20EXR.

A little bit of post processing done.

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Old Jun 9, 2011, 8:20 AM   #2
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Nice broad composition, but I think it's missing something. Either a foreground element or some colour or possibly even just a midtone boost to bring out some more detail and texture.
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Old Jun 9, 2011, 9:45 PM   #3
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nice shot.. +1/3 exposure will do the trick..i guess so..
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Old Jun 10, 2011, 12:21 AM   #4
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Nice composed picture I must say.
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Old Jun 10, 2011, 11:26 AM   #5
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Went again today to the lake and took the panorama again, with the exposure bais set to +1/3 (as said by theironhorse) and a few more settings. Today there was some activity on the lake.

I'm really thankful to peripatetic for giving me the defects in the picture. I hope you like it now.

The result is as below. Would like comments from esteemed members.

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Old Jun 15, 2011, 4:49 AM   #6
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yeah.. looks good.. sir
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Like the second one you posted, still a bit much forground for me.
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Like the second one you posted, still a bit much forground for me.
I actually went again mainly for the foreground, but was not possible...
Its the edge protected by barricades where I am standing and taking the picture.

Shall try for similar shots elsewhere with proper composition.

Thanks for the suggestion.
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Lovely photos, way better than the first one. I like the resolution. That was a great scene, Very lovely clouds. Thanks for sharing!
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