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Old Aug 14, 2011, 8:03 PM   #1
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Old Aug 14, 2011, 8:50 PM   #2
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The model is fairly well-lit, but the background (and some of her shadows) are quite dark. Also, her facial expression really doesn't seem to match what she's wearing. Her dress is so revealing, I really think she needs to have a more come-hither look about her...
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Thank you Jeannie. Points well taken. I can see your rational for what you express. A more provocative look definitely would have changed everything about the shot.

The story behind this shot is the lighting. It was reflecting off a window right onto the carnations. The model quickly sat in the reflected light and I took a few shots. We wondered if anyone would notice her revealing shirt. You did, good eye.
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Just a little to much shadow for me on the right side but not bad really
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The story behind this shot is the lighting. It was reflecting off a window right onto the carnations. The model quickly sat in the reflected light and I took a few shots. We wondered if anyone would notice her revealing shirt. You did, good eye.
Pretty cool ideal!

I gotta agree with JeannieBug about a different expression.

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