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Old Oct 9, 2011, 8:59 AM   #1
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The clouds that you seen,
creates an object of imagination
Igniting a sparkle of creativity...

Makes us wonder... and spaces out... and float afar from the real world...
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shutter spead : 1/676 second
aperture : F/5.0
ISO speed : 100
Focal length : 8 mm


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Old Oct 9, 2011, 4:01 PM   #2
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I like it. For my taste the processing is a little strong but that's not an issue. The biggest thing in this sort of shot is to get the horizon straight, apart from that not a lot else to add.
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Old Oct 9, 2011, 7:08 PM   #3
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thanks for the comment
to set the horizon straight is kindda hard for me as a beginner... i really need to practice more =.=
especially when the plane is moving, and the view is obstructed by the wing of the plane... the time is so short,,,, but thank god i managed to shoot it somehow

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Straighten and move the horizon off center. Don't make the viewer decide which is the subject of the picture, the sky or the clouds. For your shot, I would suggest a little less sky to keep the viewer looking at the clouds.
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hmmm.... something to think about...

but, when i took the picture, i thought that the dark blue color of the sky could make the picture more interesting... but i guess it was too much XD

thanks for the suggestion

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