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Old Sep 8, 2012, 11:11 PM   #1
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Attachment 190815hi! just bought the fuji hs30 and still trying out the camera.
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Old Sep 9, 2012, 2:37 PM   #2
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Looks like the camera is doing a nice job.
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Old Sep 9, 2012, 9:37 PM   #3
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Thanks Sir. I really would like to learn photography and any comments and tips are always welcome. It's the only way I could improve.
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3rd one is the best . Good luck "newbiecam"
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nice set. 3rd is the best from a composition POV.

If it helps some constructive critique on the others and why they dont work so well to me on a quick glance are:

1. the parachutting man is obviously the focus but hes too small and hard to make out what he is doing. took me a minute to figure out what it was.

2. Looks like a sunset with a tree trunk in the way. Having the full tree shilouette would look much better. the way it is, the trunk just breaks the image in two and gets in the way.

4. Light is too low and there is nothing to focus on. obvious theres land there but its just a black mass.

5. I see you were trying framing with the two trees which shows creativity. It doesnt really work here as the trees have no detail and are too thick, also there isnt enough foreground interest. it was a good idea though so you should try this style again.

Nice job overall.
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