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Old Mar 1, 2013, 2:01 AM   #1
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A high school student warms up before performing at last year's Veterans Day ceremonies.
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Old Mar 1, 2013, 3:30 AM   #2
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Hi my first impression is that the top is far to white im drawn to that instead of the girl.
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Old Mar 1, 2013, 3:01 PM   #3
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G'day Walter

I think this is a magic shot .... 10/10
Q- have you considered a square shape to concentrate the eye 'just' on the face & hair?

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Old Mar 1, 2013, 3:41 PM   #4
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How's this, Phil?
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Agreed the second one much more effective and like it a lot.
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yes thats better
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The second one is much better
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G'day Walter

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Great capture and wonderful processing.
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