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Old Jan 3, 2015, 11:21 PM   #1
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Hi All,
I Was wondering if this image could be improved or leave as is...

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Old Jan 4, 2015, 6:20 AM   #2
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I would have cut off the vertical and angular wood on the left. I found it kind of distracting and limiting the view left.
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Old Jan 4, 2015, 2:22 PM   #3
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And I would crop that bit of angled wood out of Bynx's crop as well.
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Old Jan 4, 2015, 11:30 PM   #4
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I agree with the two post above that removing the post and angled boards looks much nicer. The other way to go would be to show more of the post and angled boards.
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Old Jan 5, 2015, 3:00 AM   #5
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Thankyou all for the feedback.
I guess its why a lot of people have other editors to do the right editing.
Or selecting of images...
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Old Jan 6, 2015, 11:26 AM   #6
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'punch' the contrast a little

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Thankyou for feedback bernabeu and will do that.
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How's this?
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Nice.
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