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Old Jun 13, 2016, 10:30 AM   #1
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A recent envelopment in this area, a row of new house from a different angle and emboldened open for C&C edits whatever lol



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Old Jun 13, 2016, 5:28 PM   #2
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The composition does make your eye follow the curve of the fence in the foreground and then down across the row of houses, A lot of depth to this image. My only critical comment is that if the houses are the main subject, there seems to be a little too much obstruction for my taste: the fence, the trees and the light pole.

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I'd agree with Jehan too - a bit too much clutter

Another suggestion tho - try it again at night to avoid all the background stuff taking over the vision. Maybe a similar camera location, maybe a bit forward to see more of this end of the houses, maybe ...


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@ Wingman & Ozzie_Traveller, fair criticism. Maybe I should have titled it 'Over the fence and next door' lol

Over the fence it used to be a large area of manicured grass and now just look at what you see when you look out the window lol

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