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Old Mar 11, 2005, 9:39 PM   #1
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Old Mar 11, 2005, 9:54 PM   #2
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At first glance I thought this was a great portrait. You have the highlight side so hot that her nose is gone. If you increased the brightness of this images then I'd redo it and bring down the highlights a until you can see the outline of her nose.

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First off. What a beautiful face! Love her eyes. Secondly, superb capture. Not sure if I agree about the nose. Like to see a comarison.
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I think the nose suggestion in correct, otherwise superb capture of a very lovely lady
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Old Mar 11, 2005, 11:00 PM   #5
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You're right guys. It's mainly because of the edit (Screen Blending with Gaussian Blur)not the shot itself.

Here's another try:
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First off. What a beautiful face! Love her eyes. Secondly, superb capture. Not sure if I agree about the nose. Like to see a comarison.
Um, um...There is nothing to agree on. There is no left side of the nose. :G

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noujwas wrote:
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You're right guys. It's mainly because of the edit (Screen Blending with Gaussian Blur) not the shot itself.

Here's another try:
The new edit is only slightly better.

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Old Mar 11, 2005, 11:44 PM   #8
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Rodney, any good ?



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Old Mar 11, 2005, 11:50 PM   #9
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RodneyBlair wrote:
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First off. What a beautiful face! Love her eyes. Secondly, superb capture. Not sure if I agree about the nose. Like to see a comarison.
Um, um...There is nothing to agree on. There is no left side of the nose. :G

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Well, obviously Rod. It's as plain as the nose not on her face. :G But I've seen highly diffused lighting effects like this in portraits before. Apart from that, I was so mezorized by her eyes I maybe didn't notice?
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@Stevekin, your version sort of made me looked at other details. With the first 2 versions, I was mesmerized with the beautiful face. With yours, I suddenly realized that their are prints on her shirt. :G
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