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Old Mar 25, 2005, 3:00 AM   #1
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so i was out wandering around with my new camera and took some shots, this was one of them. i've only begun to even think about the actual composition of shots and taking photography seriously in the past month, since i got my camera. comments are welcome, as is constructive criticism.
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Old Mar 25, 2005, 2:36 PM   #2
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I like the shot. Lots of interest to keep the viewers, or at least myattention (i.e. peering through the windows, broken panes, etc.). My only comment/criticism would be the composition. In that I noticed the right side of the image is SLIGHTLY higher than the left. I don't feel it takes away from the image, instead maybe only something to be mindful of in future compositions. Nice interesting shot though.



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Old Mar 25, 2005, 2:48 PM   #3
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ya your right i did it hand held and just cropped it will have to striaghten it and the window lean away cause they were high up.
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Old Mar 25, 2005, 3:33 PM   #4
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i wish id taken it!! the only thing is i would have had 5 instead of 6 windows! do you know what i mean? its better, somehow.
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Old Mar 25, 2005, 9:57 PM   #5
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ya odd numbers seem to work is that becuase 5 is a prime number as is three? something to think about
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