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jaseerabubakar Apr 28, 2005 7:12 AM

Wasnt a preplanned shot. On the way saw this red shirt old man walking along the side of our college wall. Suggestions ??

colasteve Apr 28, 2005 7:27 AM

Nice pic but,

I think that you should have steped away from the wall and maybe got him in the sun, not sure about the sun.


jaseerabubakar Apr 28, 2005 7:32 AM

Yes, I could have done that. But I didnt get time to plan anything. Hardly got time to compose the shot, he was walking fast and I just had time to get it. Thanks for the suggestion.

KENNETHD Apr 28, 2005 10:23 AM

I like the pic...has good overall appeal, the straight lines of the wall draw your attention to the direction where the man is. I would have just used the walking man for a focal point, and perhaps changed the aperture a bit to soften the focus of the near wall. The geometric lines are kinda cool, the way they channel your gaze to the subject. Best regards,


digcamfan Apr 28, 2005 1:23 PM

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Nice catch...

Here is a tweak of it...

clem May 1, 2005 11:40 PM

very nice crop digcamfan,

when i saw the first photo, i said, the man should be cropped to the top. I scrolled down and saw that you did it perfectly. Good catch jaseera. I find that some of the better photos i take are those taken impromptu.


RodneyBlair May 2, 2005 7:20 AM

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I think this is a nice picture of a wall. As the viewer's eyes travel the wall, they find a man which makes it a bit more interesting.

Bump up the contrast of the original and crop out the sign and you have a visually effective image.


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