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Old May 4, 2005, 8:28 AM   #1
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Old May 5, 2005, 1:12 AM   #2
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For my money, this one works better than the other one. I like the angle better.Still something about it, contrast maybe, needs an upgrade. I think the composition works, but it needs a little more oomph to make it an eye catcher. Love the eyes. I might have to ponder this, I think it may be that the cheeks look a little over exposed too bright or whatever the correct term is. But you're on the right track IMO. Best regards,

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Julie, I agree with Kenneth.I think in this one,all you need to do is adjust thelevels, bringing the black point in a bit. I did this and then selectively adjusted the levels on Lucy's cheek and ear to bring that area in to line. What do you reckon ?


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The first edit you posted was indeed an improvement. I like the added work by Stevekin. Looks like he added some contrast, the sweater gained up nicely and by comparison, I believe the overall appeal is given an added boost. Best regards,

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