Go Back   Steve's Digicams Forums > Post Your Photos > Photo Critiques

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Old Jul 11, 2005, 6:40 PM   #1
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Mar 2005
Posts: 24
Default

tell me what you think?
Attached Images
 
lsager is offline   Reply With Quote
Sponsored Links
Old Jul 12, 2005, 5:10 AM   #2
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 15
Default

Nice shot. You really were able to zoom right in on the little fellow. I like the detail you were able to capture on the stick and his body.


Tippy is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jul 12, 2005, 11:20 PM   #3
Senior Member
 
johnsonM86's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2005
Posts: 723
Default

overall i think this is very well done, but i would crop off the top a little and throw a frame around it. i'd try to get it a little sharper. great shot tho.

-michael-
www.pbase.com/mikej86
johnsonM86 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jul 16, 2005, 9:45 PM   #4
Senior Member
 
clem's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2004
Posts: 158
Default

I think the rule of thirds will apply nicely here. Isager, this is just for your info, in case you haven't come across the term.

the Rule of Thirds is put to use by dividing the rectangular shape of your scene into nine smaller rectangles like so:


You add a great deal of dramatic interest by placing your subject at any of the four points where the lines cross, like the picture below
clem is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jul 17, 2005, 3:27 AM   #5
Super Moderator
 
Hards80's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Cleveland, OH
Posts: 9,046
Default

its too soft for sure.. and its lacking some interest.. i'd like to see this with maybe a quartering to you "pose" so you can get some eye contact..
Hards80 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jul 17, 2005, 10:45 AM   #6
Senior Member
 
discodudette's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Posts: 1,420
Default

Your focus (in the literal way) is sharp at the dragonfly's butt, but gets softer at hte points of his head, tail, and and wings. the right side of the stick is out of focus as well. Try to change your dof and get a little more detail next time, but it is a good photograph.
discodudette is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jul 17, 2005, 12:53 PM   #7
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Mar 2005
Posts: 24
Default

this shot was done hand held. deep inside some trees in my back yard I think thats why its fuzzy does anyone have suggestions for a sharper pic. a tripod cannot get this far into the trees please help on this.
lsager is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jul 17, 2005, 1:03 PM   #8
Senior Member
 
discodudette's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Posts: 1,420
Default

The fuzzy does not look like a motion blur due to the lack of a tripod, but more of an aperture issue. the aprture will either let more or less "depth" into your photo, and you will want to change your camera to a higher number, which will increase the amount of detail. Anyone please correct me if I am wrong
discodudette is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Aug 5, 2005, 3:54 PM   #9
Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 72
Default

Is the some dragonfly I shot few day ago !!!




Lionsitaly is offline   Reply With Quote
 
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off



All times are GMT -5. The time now is 12:31 PM.