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Old Aug 12, 2005, 5:45 PM   #1
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Old Aug 12, 2005, 8:24 PM   #2
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Very pretty. I think I would suggest more emphasis on the falls themselves...the rocks up front are the thing my eye is drawn to most, even though I know the falls are much more interesting to look at.
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Old Aug 12, 2005, 10:30 PM   #3
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I see your point about the rocks in the foreground but,for me,my eyes tend to start at the waterfall and follow the course of the stream.nevertheless,point well taken,

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Old Aug 12, 2005, 11:49 PM   #4
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i think you could have emphasized the foreground and the lead in with a vertical format.. as some of the scene on the left is not necessary for this image.. still the composition is not bad at all..

that said, you have the motion blur of the water down nicely... and the saturation is good.. the image is a tad soft though..
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Old Aug 13, 2005, 7:20 AM   #5
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I like this tighter crop of it even more. For me, it places more emphasis on the falls. Either way, nice shot.
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Old Aug 13, 2005, 10:05 AM   #6
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I hate to say it but you're right!Looks much better cropped.Thanx,

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That second version is very nice. However, if possible, I would have liked to seen where the fall begins, while leaving a little rock in the FG.
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Old Aug 13, 2005, 12:06 PM   #8
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i prefer the crop as well..
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