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Old Sep 17, 2005, 5:30 PM   #1
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this is just one pic from my uncles wedding i shot last weekend. let me know what u think about this one but i'd also appreciate it if you checked out the other wedding shots and told me what u think, i'd like some feedback on my first attempt at wedding photography. Thanks a lot!

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Old Sep 17, 2005, 5:56 PM   #2
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I think it's pretty good.

The framing choice seems a little off. Little too much space on the right and not enough on the left, but hey, nobody's perfect.

Maybe a little faster shutter speed, I don't know.

The people on the left are blurred which is cool, but it would be interesting to see that shot taken at different shutter speeds.
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only had a split second to take the shot, had to go with what i got, couldn't ask them to pose it for me, or at least i wouldn't want to.

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Yah, I know what you mean.

You get the shot you can get, and its the best under the circumstances.


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Old Sep 17, 2005, 6:34 PM   #5
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i would go ahead and shave off some of the right side..

but this shot works for me.. its not a typical wedding shot for sure.. but the sense of movement is rather interesting indeed.. you may tame down the saturation on the couple though, they are almost a little too colored against the mono background.. i think a soft colorization would be more flattering..
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