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Old Oct 18, 2005, 6:07 AM   #1
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hey guys
can i get a little help with this.

suggestions plse
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Old Oct 18, 2005, 7:26 AM   #2
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I really like that. I take it you have been playing around with it already? The only suggestion I would have is to even out the colour in the background... the two sections above the central leaf seem a little too brown compared to the other areas. Nice image though
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Old Oct 19, 2005, 12:56 AM   #3
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Try it in b/w
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Old Oct 19, 2005, 3:31 AM   #4
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its a pretty neat looking shot.. a little too much processing for my tastes, but thats just my tastes...

i still can't help but think this one is a little flat, you shot down at it a little much maybe.. getting lower and using the leaf to lead you to the water drops would be a nice technique.. this would also give some depth to the water drops as then you could see them sitting up off the leaf and catching some light even maybe..

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Old Oct 19, 2005, 4:01 AM   #5
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Hards is right looking up the leaf would be great. This is still a nice composition though. It's always good to split your image into triangles as you have done.
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Old Oct 19, 2005, 9:03 PM   #6
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thnks for all the feedback guys, i understand what u mean about the droplets being a little flat.



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Old Oct 20, 2005, 6:17 AM   #7
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If you were to ps this, I would selevtively add colour to where for the droplets. You can see that this has partially happened already.
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