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Old Oct 22, 2005, 1:14 AM   #1
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this one i liked better, and so did someone else.



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Old Oct 22, 2005, 3:08 AM   #2
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The effort is visible, but what are you trying to achieve in this photo if I may kindly ask? Thanks.
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Old Oct 22, 2005, 7:43 PM   #3
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i like the diagnol lines and the contrast between the color and black and white.. i would clone out the dead spot on the upper right corner just to improve the symmetry.. very abstract, but i like it..

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Old Oct 22, 2005, 8:29 PM   #4
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Aumma, i'm not trying to "achieve" anything necessarily here. i dont really like to look at photography that way and i think it's limiting. to stretch your question i suppose you could say i'm trying to "achieve" a nice photo of water drops on a leaf. i hope that answers your question.

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Old Oct 23, 2005, 1:39 AM   #5
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i liked it very much. But the top portion of the leaf in the frame looks not that sharp compared to the other parts. And i would leve the dead spot as it is. It some kinda adds some interest to the photo.

style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"Only thing i felt is uniform sharpness for such a wonderful idea would have been different.

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Old Oct 23, 2005, 1:45 AM   #6
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I did notice the fact that the photo is very abstract and makes a very interesting subject. The colour contrast seems to work too especially along the line of symmetry. Sometimes when we ask a question like the one I asked above, it is not so much for you the photographer but for us who are looking, admiring, critiquing, learning, etc from your photo. Indeed I like you answer. Sometimes where you heart is, there is where you treasure is. Was't trying to make it simplistic, was trying to learn from you. Kind regards.

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