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Old Oct 24, 2005, 2:47 PM   #1
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These were taken with my EOS 20D in color and but in B&W in Photoshop, then levels adjusted. Tell me which one you like better and why. Tell me which one you like the least, and offer suggestions for improvement. Thanks.

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I would have to go with the second. The first is interesting, but there is not enough detail to easily make out what it is. Also, the DOF is so small that the front of the figure is out of focus (the hand on the bow) I think maybe an angle between the 2 would work nicely as well.
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hey do u have one from the other side. i think that will look and feel great.
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no i don't have another from the otherside.
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the first image taken a bit form the left with the shooter(???) face visibility would have been perfect. But still i like the second one.

Its pretty neat. Can u post the color one if u have(hoping u did the [email protected] during post process:-))



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the first image taken a bit form the left with the shooter(???) face visibility would have been perfect. But still i like the second one.

Its pretty neat. Can u post the color one if u have(hoping u did the [email protected] during post process:-))



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i like the presentation on the second shot.. looks very classy and appealing.. possibly a tighter crop would have further improved it..

didn't care as much for this first one as it was just overall too soft due to insufficient dof..

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and the shine in the bow is perfect(on the top)

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you may clone out that triangle of metal jutting in from the right as well,i think that will help the balance...
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