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Old Oct 25, 2005, 1:23 AM   #1
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Caught a beautiful sunset here in Southern California with my Panasonic FZ20. Like it?
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Old Oct 25, 2005, 1:52 AM   #2
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Hi,

I love to take sunset/sunrise shots,.. I really like this one. If I may make a couple of suggestions:

1) Clone out the bird/plane thing at the top left.

2) Crop out the line of weeds along the bottom of the shot I dont feel they add anything of interest to the foreground

3) Possibly make the dark areas blacker with levels or curves so they are silhouetted? One of my favourite adjustments but may work?

Nice colours over the hills...

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Old Oct 25, 2005, 5:59 PM   #3
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i would crop up higher from the bottom as suggested for sure.. make it a little more panoramic in aspect ratio..

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