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Old Oct 25, 2005, 8:14 PM   #1
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I like it... I don't... I can't figure out what bugs me about this shot. Maybe if I darkened the sky a bit?
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Old Oct 25, 2005, 8:47 PM   #2
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i love the color and texture of this...it is a little bit of a tight crop. i wish there were a bit more on bottom and a tiny bit on the sides. i think that would balance the composition a little better. overall i think it is a striking shot.
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Old Oct 25, 2005, 8:50 PM   #3
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I think maybe it's too centered? It would be nice to see the angle of one of the streets, which ever one has a more interesting angle. But the colors are really nice and it is an interesting building.
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Old Oct 25, 2005, 11:17 PM   #4
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the sky is the biggest problem here.. darkening that is going to be nigh impossible with it so far blown.. you may try replacing it, not sure how good your skills at photoediting is, so that may or may not be an option for you.. the composition isnt too bad, it is centered but at least it trails off on both sides in an interesting fashion... i think an ultrawide lens would distort this in a rather neat manner..

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Old Oct 26, 2005, 1:54 AM   #5
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Hi,

I thought the sjy was wrong too so I had a play - hope you don't mind!

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Old Oct 26, 2005, 2:04 AM   #6
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Not a problem. Definately better. I am going to play with this a little bit myself tomorrow. Let's see what I can come up with. Anybody else has any ideas, tweak away!
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