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Old Oct 26, 2005, 11:52 PM   #1
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Better? About five minutes later in the shoot.
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Old Oct 26, 2005, 11:56 PM   #2
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Yes I like that much better. The shoreline just vanished into the forum on the last one. Great job.

I might edit out the small are at the bottom right, which appears to be a little pool of water and it might even improve more.
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Old Oct 27, 2005, 12:03 AM   #3
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The problem I ran into with these shots was where I had to stand to keep an annoying, huge bunch of weeds that grew right to the tide line out of the picture. I was practically standing in the water when I took these. I do have access to a weed-wacker, though...
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Old Oct 27, 2005, 12:05 AM   #4
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this looks great man... much of an improvement over the last.. i agree, clone the pool out so the shore is continuous to the corner...

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Old Oct 27, 2005, 12:07 AM   #5
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Its a great shot. This version tends to "put you there" since the shore extends down and you have a place to plant your feet
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i would have been laying there on the beach with my superwide.... at 12mm that lead in line would have been wicked..
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Old Oct 27, 2005, 1:35 AM   #7
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Thanks guy's!
One thing I hope you realize.
I gave my Rebel to my best friend (she's a way better photographer than I am) and at this time only shooting with a Kodak EasyShare 5.0 I bought for 75 bucks. Until I can afford a real camera, I'm making the best of it.
Hope you don't mind if I keep posting.
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Old Oct 27, 2005, 1:41 AM   #8
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keep shooting man... remember a good photo can be made with any camera..

"thats not to say a bunch of equipment doesn't save your ### in certain situations...
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Old Oct 27, 2005, 2:00 AM   #9
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yeah. no kidding. thanks, dustin, for your always honest take on peoples artwork. i

always have a problem with telling people what i like or don't (though that's why i post

here, isn't it?). but then i realize that that's what makes us better at what we love.

right? i suppose i should get on the ball and give a few reviews of my own.


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commenting and criqiquing others works, as well as self-critiquing is a valuable learning tool.. and there is no point in commenting if you aren't going to be honest..
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