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Old Oct 29, 2005, 4:06 AM   #1
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I was trying out the subject of patterns. Wonder whether I have made sense of it. Comments will do. Kind regards.
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Old Oct 29, 2005, 11:00 PM   #2
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Hmmm. 1/60th. Did you take that hand held? If so your a lot more steady then I am.

I think this a nice picture, but the crop is a little tight. Did you take any different angles?

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Old Oct 29, 2005, 11:13 PM   #3
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i agree that the crop is a little tight, but i think if i saw this hanging on a wall, i would find it quite interesting.
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Old Oct 29, 2005, 11:23 PM   #4
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very crisp. love it!
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Old Oct 30, 2005, 12:37 AM   #5
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Oh thanks folks for putting this huge smile on my face. You comments and remarks really mean I am getting somewhere. About the crop which seems too tight, I decided to put the original. I have fiddle a bit with the contrast. Is this a better one then?

Again, thank Dale, Crawford and Julies:-)

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Old Oct 30, 2005, 1:03 AM   #6
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i like the crop better, but i am also a big fan of abstract. you were shooting for pattern? i think the crop hit's the mark.


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That is right Scot, I was shooting for patterns and want it tight to bring out the pattern. Thanks for looking.

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Old Oct 30, 2005, 9:50 PM   #8
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With the picture as it is the first crop is better.

Very nice

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Old Oct 30, 2005, 10:38 PM   #9
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Dale, this was hand held. I am still learning the art of holding a camera steadily. It comes with time. Thanks for looking and kind regards.
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Old Oct 31, 2005, 1:37 AM   #10
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i prefer the first crop.. i think you did a pretty good job here, one of your better efforts to date..
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