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Old Nov 17, 2005, 11:16 AM   #1
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I'm into photgraphing classic and customized cars and I want to start making some poster-size creations. Would appreciate your impressions and suggestions.


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Old Nov 17, 2005, 11:20 AM   #2
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first thing to do.. do a little cloning work and make your tires full circles..that was the first thing that i noticed looking at this..

the rest looks pretty good and i will take another look at it after lab..

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Good eye with the tires. If I was to say anything, its that the bottom image appears soft/OOF in comparison to the top image. Good mask work though, hope you have a tablet for all the selection work you do...........
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Old Nov 17, 2005, 1:46 PM   #4
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Thanks for the observations/suggestions Dustin and Tigger. Do you think that the masked headlights in the corners are distracting?
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What about this version?


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Old Nov 17, 2005, 3:14 PM   #6
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i prefer the second version.. much cleaner.. still, smooth out the front driver tire in the top photo.. its a little flat still on the bottom..

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I like the second image as well. The lights were not doing anything for me. I did like the font in the first one better, although it would be easier to read if it was the color of the second try.
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I agree with the ditching of the lights in the corners - nice idea, but made it very cluttered. The second image is much cleaner. Nice poster - I'd hang it on my wall!

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