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Old Nov 28, 2005, 6:23 AM   #1
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Hi All,

This shot was taken yesterday on Longson island. This scenewas viewedinside the kitchen of Nha Lon (Big House).

Your constructive comments welcomed.

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Old Nov 28, 2005, 7:25 AM   #2
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Excellent shot.

I have no criticism of any substance. I suppose you might say that the bright spots on the beam top-left are slightly distracting and don't add anything to the photo - so perhaps clone those out.

Overall though it's an excellent shot. I like the B&W conversion. I like the wide angle. I like the focal point on the girls. The light is good. Great stuff.
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Old Nov 28, 2005, 10:37 AM   #4
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Quan,

this is EXCELLENT!! composition is superb, the moment is captured beautifully.. this is definately one of those shots of a lifetime.. this one will be in your portfolio for many many years... i would buy this shot if i were looking in a gallery.. so be proud of this one..

thanks for sharing this one, i very much enjoyed viewing it..

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Old Nov 28, 2005, 9:47 PM   #5
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Thanks everyone for your kind comments. As suggested by peripatetic and some other folks of other forums, I cropped out the three light dots which are not necessary to be in the photo.

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Old Nov 29, 2005, 12:38 AM   #6
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The edit is great (which was expected given the high quality of the original). Great shot!
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Old Nov 29, 2005, 4:21 PM   #7
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Great, one of the best posted in this forum in my opinion.

Tell us more about it.
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Old Nov 29, 2005, 7:37 PM   #8
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LBoy wrote:
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Great, one of the best posted in this forum in my opinion.

Tell us more about it.

i totally agree.. one of the best i have seen posted anywhere in a while..

BTW- i actually preferred the composition with more room on top of the 1st shot.. maybe insead of crop out the highlight spots (actually i dont really care if you leave them) just clone em out..
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i agree with dustin about the crop/highlights......wonderful capture. you should really be proud of this one!
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Old Nov 29, 2005, 11:42 PM   #10
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I am glad you cropped off that bright spot at the top. Bingo.

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