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Old Dec 7, 2005, 9:49 AM   #1
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Old Dec 7, 2005, 10:31 AM   #2
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Nice picture, but I think if you had aplied the rule of thirds it may have been even better.:homey:



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Old Dec 7, 2005, 12:19 PM   #3
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i think you are a little lacking in interest here.. the colors are very muted due to the winter season giving the shot a very flat look.. this needs something else, as is there just isnt enough going on here..

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I rather like the muted colors but I would like a different composition - perhaps 2/3 water & reflection and 1/3 land?
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Old Dec 7, 2005, 2:26 PM   #5
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Maybe a little more contrast and some color. I don't mind the crop. I think the reflection is the most appealing thing in the shot so I would not want to take any of it away.


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Old Dec 7, 2005, 2:39 PM   #6
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i think the edit looks really good.
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Old Dec 7, 2005, 3:50 PM   #7
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The edit looks really good. Just the right boost.
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Old Dec 7, 2005, 6:35 PM   #8
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sometimes i'm blind...I always ezitate to boost the colors but the edit it isn't bad but i wanted too show to u people the real mood of the place a near witnter shoot with some remains from the autumn. about the rule of thirds...sometimes it's not bad to put the line in the middle : the reflection it's giving simetry and equilibrum to the composition IMO


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Old Dec 7, 2005, 8:08 PM   #9
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Maby like this. . ..


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Old Dec 7, 2005, 11:08 PM   #10
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The second first edit is must better. This looks like one of thosedifficult photos. Wonder whether the rule of the third would have made any difference1.
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