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Old Dec 19, 2005, 11:36 PM   #1
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sort of portrait i guess, although much of his face is out of the photo. idk i just liked it let me know what you think.



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Old Dec 19, 2005, 11:53 PM   #2
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MJ, this one seems to be out of focus. I thought the tip of the nose might be in focus but even that one is not.
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Old Dec 20, 2005, 12:35 AM   #3
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was at 1.8 so there you go.

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Old Dec 20, 2005, 8:27 AM   #4
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i agree about the focus but there are some other elements that i like here. i think if you had a little more of the subjects face in the shot this would work really well, i like the shallow DoF and the blurred out guy next to him and the blur of color after that....i know you are a more spontaneous shooter, not into setting things up.* just keep going
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yea.. dof is too shallow.. and the blurred background is too distracting, there are too many bright spots.. including the other face..

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Old Dec 21, 2005, 12:11 AM   #6
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You know MJ, I like your products because you are original.
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Old Dec 21, 2005, 10:08 AM   #7
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thanks Aumma, means a lot man.

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