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Old Dec 27, 2005, 12:39 PM   #1
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Same as before, teach me.:-)

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Old Dec 29, 2005, 12:52 AM   #2
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This one is not right. the meter reading was not right perhaps.
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Old Dec 29, 2005, 1:56 AM   #3
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A few problems I can see...

1. Lighting - there is shadow on the girl's face from the bear, unsatisfying and makes it difficult to get the exposure on the face right.
2. Missed focus - it seems that the focus was perhaps on her sleeve? Anyway it seems to me that you have used a moderate telephoto focal length and missed the focus just slightly. Her face, and particularly her eyes, should be sharper.

And some that I think are more easily corrected...

3. Looks a bit flat - so a levels adjustment is in order I think.
4. Lacking in colour and detail - so I boosted the saturation a touch, I'm not sure this was the best outfit for her to be wearing.
5. Composition - lots of dead space to the right that does nothing.

She seems to be an extremely beautiful little girl, I'm sure if you can get closer to that hair and eyes we will see some great shots.
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Old Dec 29, 2005, 3:40 PM   #4
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it is better than your last one.
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Old Dec 29, 2005, 10:40 PM   #5
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The edit is much better. Good edit Peri.
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