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Old Jan 17, 2006, 10:56 PM   #1
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what do you think about this one?



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Old Jan 17, 2006, 10:58 PM   #2
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sorry about the quality. It looks really washed out after I posted it but it still looks good on my local machine. Hmmm?
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Old Jan 18, 2006, 10:45 AM   #3
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sharpen it up a bit after resize.. that will give you a crisp image.. i like the colors and the silhouette here, but do not think the tree adds anything, rather it seems to make it busy.. still, pleasing enough shot..

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Old Jan 18, 2006, 1:16 PM   #4
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sharpen it up a bit after resize.. that will give you a crisp image.. i like the colors and the silhouette here, but do not think the tree adds anything, rather it seems to make it busy.. still, pleasing enough shot..

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Hummm. I like the tree. It flows right to the cow.
{Imagine that... I disagree with Dustin. I hope it's allowed.}
I'd be tempted to get rid of the little tree right by the cow.
I like it. Even thoughyou never responded to my last post or my
long explanation of the rule of thirds in your thread "new shot"

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Old Jan 18, 2006, 3:24 PM   #5
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Dale,

sorry for not replying to the rule of 3rds post, it was most useful information. Now,each time I frame a shot I try to look at itusing the rule of thirds and see if it applies. Thank you for your valuable insight and I apologize for not replying.

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Old Jan 18, 2006, 3:28 PM   #6
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perhaps PS the branches the collide with your cow to make him stand out a but more.
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Old Jan 18, 2006, 5:41 PM   #7
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yea, its the branches that intersect the cow that i am most bothered by.. and some of them that are close.. more seperation between the branches and cow would have worked i think..

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yea, its the branches that intersect the cow that i am most bothered by.. and some of them that are close.. more seperation between the branches and cow would have worked i think..

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OK Aaron,

Get rid of the branch {tree}{bush}that sticks up by the cow.

And the other cow... Put a smileyface on him.:-)

Naw... Just kiddingabout the smiley face.

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Old Jan 18, 2006, 11:38 PM   #9
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Thanks for the feedback everyone! I Will see if I can shoot it again (sans little tree).

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Old Jan 18, 2006, 11:46 PM   #10
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How about if you crop off part of that dark bottom. It does not add much to the shot. Something like the edit. Hope you don't mind. Kind regards. Jaki.
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