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Old Jan 17, 2006, 10:41 PM   #1
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A sunset taken from behind the family store. Although, the rooftops aren't the most beautiful scenery, I think they make a statement.
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Old Jan 17, 2006, 11:03 PM   #2
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Nice Carskick, I like the partial trees on the edges, it shows flow. I get the feel of it as well

good shot and nice sky.

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Old Jan 19, 2006, 9:35 AM   #3
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I like the colors. The composition is okay but hte lights on the right bottom are distracting to me.
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Old Jan 19, 2006, 2:18 PM   #4
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for me there is not enough detail in the foreground, and the trees really break up the flow of the sky.. making it just a bit busy..
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Old Jan 19, 2006, 10:46 PM   #5
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I am glad you like it aaron.

For nelmer and hards, maybe you'll like this shot better. I actually intentionaly tried to darken the foreground as it is mostly rooftop and not very attractive. This version has more sky, fewer lights, and is less busy, though I think it's up to preference as I like the multiple tree picture as well. Enjoy, and let me know what you think.
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Old Jan 19, 2006, 11:39 PM   #6
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Kind of think the second one is much better. Less detraction from the foreground. Thanks for sharing. Jaki
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