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Old Jan 20, 2006, 12:13 PM   #1
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To those who were kind enough to comment on my prvious red eye pic, thanks.

Here's a new submission, I call it Innocence. There are many things that one could interpret in that little girl's look.

As always, you comments are welcomed. BTW, thiswassized to fit in a frame.

Cheers, Dan


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Old Jan 20, 2006, 12:59 PM   #2
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cute facial expression. What are they thinking.

Some things here

The background is not good. At this point either blur it out in PS or put in a new one. In the future watch for it. Either blur it completely using the DOF of your lens, or set up the shot if possible.

The spot focus effect used here I feel is to harsh, try the one in picasa2 (a free proggy from google that is great for crop and quick whole photo edits) it has a much nicer transition than this.

perhaps a bit more light on the far side of her face as well. you can use available light of more lamps, or bounce your flash using some posterboard.


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