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Old Jan 22, 2006, 10:44 AM   #1
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Old Jan 22, 2006, 12:52 PM   #5
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IMO the first thing you need to do is bin #1, #3,#5,#6.

#2 and #4 are interesting.

I think there is too much space in the frame in #2 though, but a modest crop helps.

There are some jpg artifacts in the reduced version you posted, but it is probably due to reduction in size.

There is potential in #4 too I think, but I think this crop in #2 and some modest photoshop tweaking produce a pretty good photo.

Nice work.
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#2 is probably my favorite as well.. nicely captured pair.. the only thing that bugs me is the reflections off the water.. you may see if you can selectively darken that a bit maybe.. i like the tighter crop for sure..

#4 is interesting as well..

these are MUCH better than your first attempt.. nice work
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Maybe for the reflection, he should have used a polarizer. Thanks Jaki.
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Old Jan 23, 2006, 5:55 AM   #8
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Number 4 for me, the movement gives it some life and interest.
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