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Old Jan 26, 2006, 10:16 AM   #1
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In terms of diminishing lines
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Old Jan 26, 2006, 10:22 AM   #2
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some of your highlights are blown, otherwise i like the lines in this, the perspective works, not bad.
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Old Jan 26, 2006, 10:27 AM   #3
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I like this photo as well. Apart from julies comments I tend to think the crop here is a bit to tight.
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Old Jan 26, 2006, 10:28 AM   #4
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I would have liked to have seen slightly more on the right side. It kind of stops abruptly. Do you have more of the original to play with ?

opps tiger got in before me.. haha.

ok what else? Nothing really. It looks quite animal-istic(is that a word), menacing.

Interesting shot.
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Old Jan 26, 2006, 10:52 AM   #5
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Thanks everyone - is this any better?
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Old Jan 26, 2006, 11:04 AM   #6
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Another cool shot from you today Steve. I prefer the first post. The perspective is what makes this shot pop. Good use of B & W too.
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Old Jan 26, 2006, 12:36 PM   #7
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Agree with all the comments here - great perspective but would have been nice to see a bit more on the right hand side. The photo seems to 'stop' too soon. Strong composition otherwise, and nice sharp focus too.
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Old Jan 26, 2006, 3:02 PM   #8
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Syd,

You were supposed to say, "No..... its on the left track".

I had ten bucks on that expected response .
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Old Jan 26, 2006, 6:41 PM   #9
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the first one is just too tight for me... good presentation and interesting textures.. but pretty tight..

the second one does not feel balanced to me.. the front of the tank is fine, i think its still a bit tight on the right side though.. better i think though..

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Old Jan 27, 2006, 2:51 AM   #10
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Thanks everyone for the great feedback - last attempt now. As you can see I was trying to work my away around highlight areas in the previous crops :roll:
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