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Old Jan 26, 2006, 4:22 PM   #1
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My third and final post of today. Have been playing with pano type crops. Critiques welcome as always.
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Old Jan 26, 2006, 6:06 PM   #2
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Not bad.

But probably could be improved in some way.

Maybe include the street level plus one or two levels of office buildings.


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Old Jan 26, 2006, 9:32 PM   #3
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Yah, Syd some variation would probably make a difference. But there is good effort here in combining the different aspects of the pano together. New in this field and will learn from you. Regards. Jaki.
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Old Jan 27, 2006, 1:41 AM   #4
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Hi Syd,

Interesting lines you have chosen for this shot - i have looked at this twice now and am still not sure if I like the diagonals or if it would look better straight?? Also the white balance seems a little funky - maybe my eyes and the fact its 7am but just feel it has a really unusual green cast to it.

I am sure that the pano queen will comment soonand teach us all something new!! :G

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Old Jan 27, 2006, 2:15 AM   #5
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Ok guys I'll work on an improvement. The green cast is deliberate Dom as I'm going for a boycesque feel, don't quite feel I pulled it off though.

"I am sure that the pano queen will comment soonand teach us all something new!! :G

Dom"


Should be interesting. I've never had a critique I don't think from our pano queen before. hint hint :?
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Old Jan 27, 2006, 4:54 AM   #6
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No editing other than a slightly wider crop. Any better?
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Old Jan 27, 2006, 6:12 PM   #7
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maybe apply that cool green tone
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Old Jan 28, 2006, 5:48 AM   #8
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No, I like the green less complete one better... more shocking...
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Old Jan 28, 2006, 9:14 AM   #9
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Yes it is a great shoot I like it (the second one where you can seethe bottow of the building....why don't you try a little green tone just as option I would like to see....could be nice also

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Old Jan 28, 2006, 4:45 PM   #10
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I prefer the first cool green pic. I think a touch more contrast gives it a more moody feel.

I hope you dont mind but I took it and experimented with different shades then stuck them all together which made it a bit more abstract.
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