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Old Jan 29, 2006, 4:38 PM   #1
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Working with the brige lines.




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Old Jan 29, 2006, 4:50 PM   #2
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Maby with this crop!?!

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Old Jan 29, 2006, 5:28 PM   #3
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i agree with Boily... too much sky in the first one. otherwise, a very interesting study in lines and angles.
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Old Jan 29, 2006, 5:49 PM   #4
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I like the tighter crop. I think the shot would have greater impact with a 'moodier sky'.



There is something striking about the subject matter.





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Old Jan 29, 2006, 5:53 PM   #5
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i prefer the crop too.. the sky isnt that interesting, so getting rid of it works well.. contrast boost helped a bit too.. i agree, a moodier sky and maybe some more dramatic lighting would have helped this one quite a bit i think..

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Old Jan 29, 2006, 6:44 PM   #6
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i agree about the crop and the sky. it does have nice perspective/angle and lines. it would look good in a series with your other bridge shots.
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Old Jan 29, 2006, 7:04 PM   #7
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TY Boily for the tute.

Your version looks better with the crop.



Thanks all for your comments/suggestions.

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