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Old Feb 6, 2006, 7:15 AM   #21
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Its a lovely photo would, i would like to see itwith less empty space to theleft and more space above it, as for me the flame still feels a bit encroached on.

Love the texture of the candle showing on the latest version.
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Old Feb 6, 2006, 7:43 AM   #22
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LBoy, thanks. Huh, you charged like a tank... only kidding. :G

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Old Feb 6, 2006, 10:25 AM   #23
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Stustaff, thanks for looking and for commenting. I left the space on the left because of the shadow which I thought added some artistic flair but it seems this did not come out well.

Yes, regretably, I also like more space of the flame. This was my first shot of its kind. I promise to improve on this one. Again thanks for the support; we learn through the mistakes we make.

Hey LBoy, no big deal, I was just trying to tease you. I was telling you how I felt when I read your comments. I meant it more as a compliment, I just hope I succeeded in putting it across. I want you to know that I appreciate your comments. You push me to the limits. On my part, I want to learn and will not take offence at what somebody tells me. I am adult enough to distinguish between a sincere heart to help me and one that is not. I will always appreciate your comments.

I posted another thread after this one but I have not seen your comments. Always looking to read them. Please do look and say something. Regards. Jaki.
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Old Feb 6, 2006, 10:45 AM   #24
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I posted another threat after this but have not seen your comments.
I will comment and say that threatening people for good reviews is not proper forum etiquette :blah:
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Old Feb 6, 2006, 10:59 AM   #25
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Your edited version is excellent. Good work.


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Old Feb 6, 2006, 11:08 AM   #26
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VATechtigger, oh you never fail to notice anything. :P. Ho ho, did the correction. I was doing many things then and did not bother to read carefully. But thanks for pointing the error out. :|


Thanks Ladyhawk, always look forward to your comments. Regards. Jaki.
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Old Feb 6, 2006, 3:28 PM   #27
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i like the last edit here. its much more detailed and contrasty and the composition is straighter and less tight.

nice
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Old Feb 6, 2006, 10:53 PM   #28
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Thanks Dustin, comments always appreciated. Can now let the thread retire.:G Regards Jaki.
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