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Old Feb 3, 2006, 8:44 PM   #1
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I'm just getting started with photography ... and I really enjoy the images and comments in this forum. Here's a view from my home in Phoenix (if I resized it correctly) .... help me make it better!
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Old Feb 3, 2006, 10:07 PM   #2
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exposure looks pretty good, but the shot is too "empty"... nothing seems to be the focal point, too much vacant space. if you were to move to the left, to reduce the visual gap between that tall cactus and the moon, and then shoot in vertical format with the moon more directly behind - but definitely NOT hidden by - the cactus,you'd have a nice shot. just my 2 cents' worth...
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Old Feb 4, 2006, 12:10 AM   #3
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I agree with Squirel. Was wondering which was the centre of focus? It seems the cactus. Regards. Jaki
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Old Feb 5, 2006, 2:02 PM   #4
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thanks for the feedback ....
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