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Old Feb 4, 2006, 8:38 PM   #1
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At 170mm handheld

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Old Feb 4, 2006, 10:48 PM   #2
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I'm not sure I like the cropping, but I like the color!
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Old Feb 5, 2006, 12:37 AM   #3
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agreed. i kept trying to scroll down to see the rest of the subject. great color and clarity, but this one really needs to include the whole mask... that or just do a true macro of one small part, so no one can tell there's more they aren't seeing...
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Old Feb 5, 2006, 5:44 AM   #4
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agreed. i kept trying to scroll down to see the rest of the subject. great color and clarity, but this one really needs to include the whole mask... that or just do a true macro of one small part, so no one can tell there's more they aren't seeing...
sorry i did not crop anything in the earlier pict
this is the complete pict of the mask (50mm1.4)
i just found the lower part a lot less interesting
see what you guys think

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Old Feb 5, 2006, 8:15 AM   #5
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I think the whole mask is much more interesting, but needs a different background as in both shots it distracts from the mask. I would experiment with a variety of lighting and angles as well.
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Old Feb 5, 2006, 9:32 AM   #6
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In the first one, it appears that you have some dust on your sensor...top right corner and top middle.

Also, you may want to resize your pics so they appear in the forum, rather than clicking through a link. Resizing to 800x600 works well. You may get more comments if we have to do less work viewing:-)
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Old Feb 5, 2006, 10:12 AM   #7
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I also see some possible dust on your sensor.

The color and detail captured using the Pentax is good on the first one.

The second shot looks like the white balance is off as far as a critique goes.

Keep posting.
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Old Feb 5, 2006, 11:39 AM   #8
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vIZnquest wrote:
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I also see some possible dust on your sensor.

The color and detail captured using the Pentax is good on the first one.

The second shot looks like the white balance is off as far as a critique goes.

Keep posting.
gee you guys are really sharp
yes. the dust is on the lens, not on the sensor yet (thank god)
agreed that the 2nd pict white balance was off
it was posted just to show the whole mask
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