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Old Feb 12, 2006, 10:01 PM   #1
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My first flower shot.
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Old Feb 13, 2006, 1:13 AM   #2
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Very good for your first try,:| but there are a couple things to mention... First, you may want to clean the pollen off the petals before shooting, and secondly, I personnally don't agree with the background colour.
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Old Feb 13, 2006, 10:04 AM   #3
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I like the close up. Don't be discouraged. Try again. Regards. Jaki.
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Old Feb 13, 2006, 2:33 PM   #4
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good first attempt.. overall the composition isn't bad.. but you are a bit underexposed, when you fill the frame with this much white, overexpose a stop or two to keep your whites brilliant.. that would go along way to improve this shot..
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Old Feb 13, 2006, 6:48 PM   #5
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Having a bit of fun
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Old Feb 13, 2006, 7:47 PM   #6
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that one looks much better, very nice first flower macro!
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Old Feb 14, 2006, 1:48 PM   #7
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The second one looks better... Nice close-up shot, very lovely flower.





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