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Old Mar 4, 2006, 8:27 PM   #1
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Comments and critiques welcome Has been cropped, and mildly sharpened.

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-Ben
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Old Mar 4, 2006, 11:23 PM   #2
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Those are lovely patterns. I think this is a great improvement on the previous shot. and keep them coming. I think I am satisfied witht he technical aspects.

You could win a contract with a designer and go all the way laughing to the bank.:G Regards. Jaki.
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Old Mar 4, 2006, 11:36 PM   #3
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i actually preferred the repeating circular patterns in the first one better..

not to say this is not a great shot, but just not AS great as the first one.. thanks for sharing these, i have enjoyed viewing them!
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Old Mar 5, 2006, 4:54 AM   #4
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Jaki, Dustin,

Thanks again for replying. Always very much appreciated.

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they are both colorful, interesting images- very cool
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Old Mar 6, 2006, 11:46 AM   #6
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Ben,

I like this one better than the other, very, very nicely done. Great picture.

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Old Mar 6, 2006, 1:09 PM   #7
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Julie, LT,

Thanks very much for your comments - as always, much appreciated.


Can I throw out a question to y'all regarding this one? Does the fact that all the drops are symmetrically aligned except the 3 on the right bother anyone or detract from this one? I was going for the drops lining up with the eye of the feather, but obviously with the crop, that's not as obvious, so the rationale for having 3 in a row is also less obvious.

Thanks again everyone!

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Old Mar 6, 2006, 8:22 PM   #8
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now that you mention it they do throw off the symmetry... but as it didnt bother me before you pointed out, i dont think its a huge issue..
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It does throw it off a little, but hardly noticeable because of the nice pattern and colors of the main part of the picture, and it actually looks like it was intentionally done that way. Just my 2 cents.

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Old Mar 9, 2006, 5:31 AM   #10
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Dustin, LT,

Thanks for the comments - I'll stop being obsessive now (maybe! )

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