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Old Mar 8, 2006, 4:31 PM   #1
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Was bored today nothing on tv and I got out of the school a little early. I was planning to do more with this shot but did not like the original color. I was thinking of having a leaf in the middle of the shot so there is something there to focus on. As is right now there is nothing for the eye to focus on... or is there? I realy don't know what I am doing so tell me at least what do you think of the color is it too cold?
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Old Mar 8, 2006, 9:58 PM   #2
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With all due respect a least you know what you wanted to to. :G I think there are beautiful patterns here. Regards. Jaki
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Old Mar 9, 2006, 4:23 AM   #3
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i think colour is good and image is well exposed all round.

nice job your improving quick



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Old Mar 9, 2006, 7:03 AM   #4
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Hi Saban,

Hope you don't mind but I wondered what this would look likeas a'contrasty' B&W ......
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This is a nice abstract. It works as a study in pattern, light and texture. Can't wait to see more from you.
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Old Mar 9, 2006, 8:22 PM   #6
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Thanks SteveDak that does look better. I was not sure on the original color then I was messing with it for a while but never thought about black and white.
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Old Mar 9, 2006, 9:40 PM   #7
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i agree.

nice artistic eye, saban.

follow this path and i see great things in store for you, grasshopper!!


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