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Old Mar 11, 2006, 10:33 AM   #1
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Took a ride last night did some time exposures, Think I need to darken the building just a little. Comments always welcome...
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Old Mar 11, 2006, 1:29 PM   #2
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This is anawesome shot, but there is a white halo around the building that might need fixing.
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Old Mar 11, 2006, 1:49 PM   #3
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Yes and not only that before anyone else says it, I will say that the tops of the roof where it comes to the triangle shape looks jagged (pixelated) but I printed this picture on Photo paper and its not like that when printed .
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Old Mar 11, 2006, 5:07 PM   #4
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i'll say it again...very cool atmospheric image- spoooky
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Old Mar 11, 2006, 5:29 PM   #5
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Very cool shot and I think the white halo so to speak is the clouds passing by on this time exposure:-)
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Old Mar 11, 2006, 7:20 PM   #6
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Seeing if maybe this is better
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Old Mar 15, 2006, 9:41 AM   #7
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I like the second, but is your horizon just slightly tilted? The building seems to be leaning a bit.
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Old Mar 15, 2006, 11:41 AM   #8
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This is a lovely shot.

Only thing I have to add to what's already been said is that for me, the crop is a little too tight around the building. Now, I wasn't there, so there's probably good reason - ugly things next to it, for e.g. - but if you could afford to give it a bit more context at the sides, I think it'd work even better!

If it were short exposure, I'd say try a pano, with the camera in portrait orientation. But with long exposures and that sky, that'd be tough! lol.

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Old Mar 15, 2006, 11:48 AM   #9
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Very good shot...

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