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Old Mar 25, 2006, 5:27 AM   #1
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i am not sure about this... how it look to you guys, it was taken during my desert travel adventure with my friends.



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Old Mar 25, 2006, 5:28 AM   #2
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how about this one??? hope you like it.
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Old Mar 25, 2006, 5:37 AM   #3
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i really like shot 2. i think in this case a greater dof would have added more impact to this shot.

great lines leading into the horizon btw.also nice level of detail in the sand.



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Old Mar 26, 2006, 3:25 PM   #4
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i also like both shots:|, especially number 2.

what camera/lens did you use?

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Old Mar 28, 2006, 10:45 AM   #5
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Looking at the Exif

Make = OLYMPUS OPTICAL CO.,LTD
Model = C5050Z
Orientation = top/left
Software = Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows
Date Time = 2006-03-25 03:19:24

[Camera]
Exposure Time = 1/800"
F Number = F5.6


I use Opanda iExif which is great and there is a free download version. All you do is right click on any pic and if the Exif is there you will be able to see it.

BTW I like the second one as well, but would have been stronger with a greater DOF.

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Old Mar 28, 2006, 12:39 PM   #6
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Also like no2 in terms of composition
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Old Mar 28, 2006, 1:05 PM   #7
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The second is very nice compositionally. Would prefer to see a greater DOF as others have mentioned. I'd also like to see a slightly less tight crop. I'm a stickler for the rule of thirds in most cases, and would love to see the leading line starting on the right-hand third, and ending on the left hand one.

Still, a nice capture.

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Old Mar 28, 2006, 1:45 PM   #8
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I love the strong lines in both. The composition of #2 is better; in #1 the peak of the dune is uncomfortably close to the top edge.
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Old Mar 30, 2006, 4:42 AM   #9
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thanks guys for the appreciation it put me more courage.sorry for the late respnose i just get back from out of town. thanks for sharing your idea.

mark was right about the cam i used and how to figure out.
Make = OLYMPUS
Model = C5050Z


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